Wednesday 23 March 2016

The Busy Lane



WALT: Write a Describing Writing
The Busy Lane 💫


Trying to move but i'm crushed from the crowd. I squeeze out and I'm free I walk past and a shopkeeper speedily sprints to me and hooks my shoulder and bribing me to come in his store. I rush in before everyone else does. I find a snake on his arm I shriek and up-spring in the air. I take a closer look “ohhh“I take a hulking breath, it's only wood. I calmly  stroll out and


2 x 2 Digits

Flying Fox and the Mountain

  🏃FLYING FOX & MOUNTAIN🏃


       WALT:  Write a Describing story about camp       

  FLYING FOX
Waiting for my turn to come next, walk up the steps feeling worried for no reason. Sit down on the bench. Have the biggest fright in my stomach. I sit down on the flying fox, they count to 5,  5 4 3 2 1 and boom I left my legs with fright. I needed to scream but it couldn't come out and I nearly puke with excitement.

MOUNTAIN
We start the walk my legs already getting tired, they feel like jelly. I look up the steps (path) it looks backbreaking I turn around everyone was behind me. I said to myself I don't want to do this.
We start the journey… 1 hour later we stop for a snack break.

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