Wednesday 23 March 2016

The Busy Lane



WALT: Write a Describing Writing
The Busy Lane 💫


Trying to move but i'm crushed from the crowd. I squeeze out and I'm free I walk past and a shopkeeper speedily sprints to me and hooks my shoulder and bribing me to come in his store. I rush in before everyone else does. I find a snake on his arm I shriek and up-spring in the air. I take a closer look “ohhh“I take a hulking breath, it's only wood. I calmly  stroll out and


1 comment:

  1. Hey Jess
    that's really Descriptive
    but what are the highlighted words?
    From Sam

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