This week we finished speeches and they were all great and we have finished our poems and made new ones heres one of my new poems - its an Acrostic, One of my choices
Fight for you
Respect you
Include you
Encourage you
Need you
Deserve you
Stand by you
hi my names caitlin i like your piece of work next time you might want darken the font
ReplyDeleteHello Caitlin
DeleteThank you for your helpful and nice comment i will work on it next time
From Jessica
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Hi my name is Sahara
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem and the way you explained what a friend is. to be better than before maybe make the font darker:)
please cheak out my blog
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Hi Sahara
DeleteThank you so much for your helpful and lovely comment i will make it darker next time
From Jessica
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Ni Hao Jessica
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you made a acrostic poem and I like how you did it about friends and the way you said stand by you that is such a good thing that you respect people and your friends and I have had a look at your blog and it looks really cool and it has been up dated though the week and I like how you did a slide about poems I just think you need to darken you words up a little bit so they are black not grey.
Haere-Ra Jazmine
Hello Jazmine
DeleteThankyou for the comment I will work on my color of my font
From Jess
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